10.09.2011 06:31 - b0SamueL0b
22.06.2010 00:26 - Kishuf
What the fuck was that?? Lame!
10.11.2009 20:48 - James Bellini
Dude, grammar?! I was out of breath after some of your rambling paragraphs devoid of commas or stops! Frankly this is too simple...
08.09.2009 12:58 - Shockrock
Not that bad, but by far too short and linear. There aren't any real choices in the game and descriptions are imho not sufficient to create the right atmosphere. However it's certainly okay, if you only want to kill a few minutes... and there's indeed a way to win! Good luck with your next project Steven!!! ^^
23.07.2009 21:40 - the author
FOR FK SAKE U CAN WIN
21.06.2009 05:21 - sucker
I can't believe I got suckered into playing this ... I don't know how I end up with the book, there doesn't appear to be any way you can win. This is either an attempt at bad humor or an insult to gaming. DO NOT PLAY THIS GAME!!!!!!! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DO NOT PLAY THIS GAME!!!!
07.06.2009 23:02 - loser
Little depth to this story or any suspense. I was disappointed.
09.04.2009 21:39 - steven peter mcdouga
thx everybody! Im workin on a 2nd book. Except its now set in the future!
21.02.2009 21:42 - Davio
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME !!!!AND MORE AWESOME
19.02.2009 23:20 - snodwozzal
an interesting book from an up and coming new author